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Great idea and beautiful work.
Here is my opinion but I am very critical. Please, do not be offended.
I am not a webdesigner, but the third website is not centered on the width.
The logo bothers me because it is dark.
The margin of the page is too wide.
The display is too strict, it's too serious, this lack of forms that seem to move. As usual for commercials, ads shock, you see?
This is what accounts for slightly more, my idea of advertising. But with more content.
Another example.
Do not hesitate to use
brushes.